Life Journeys of the Elements
Quadru-Haiku
Weightless among clouds
Floating higher in the sky
Drifting on the air
Sparks begin the blaze
Flames dancing everywhere now
Ash is what remains
Rejuvenation
Falling to cover the Earth
In order to cleanse
Stoic and unmoved
Holding strong through many years
Incremental change
About the Creator
Colt Henderson
I usually write horror.
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Comments (16)
I like how the last line “incremental change” finishes out the large changes above it.
Love nature poems!!! Wonderfully written loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Wow, these haiku really showcase your talent. Very well done!
Very vivid imagery and flow!
Gorgeous! Each haiku is so uniquely captivating. ❤️
This is so beautiful! I enjoyed the shift through all the elements. It was like a peaceful love song hovering over and then falling to the Earth. :)
Well done! I love the flow of the words....
Fits nature so well, everything about it.
Nice flow from image to image!
Well done.
You painted a picture. Very nice. Subscribed and hearted.
These are dreamlike
This was so wonderful! Brilliantly executed! I loved it!
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very nicely done
very nicely done.
Wow, that was amazing! I loved the way you transitioned from one haiku to the next, so seamless. Wonderful work :)