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LETTER TO A FRIEND

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By MissclickedPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
Daisy and Mini

HEY! how u doin

for better I wish, I hope you doin

you said you called

and some other messages too

yet they never reached

wonder who you send it to?

the laughs, the giggles

on those stairs it whistles

skipping classes, sipping gossips

and a few broken test tube glasses

the backside benches and us two wenches

bet you are happier in the new town

for i guess more of me were found

maybe the lights fazed you a lot

for when i reached you never called

but whenever you are done

and the influence on you is none

do reach me out, i have a lot to say

''how's life? how's college?

are you still a fan of Barbara palvin?''

till then i'll keep this letter

waiting for things between to get better

beats me i wrote, letter to a friend

just for a letter to be never send.

Writer's note: firstly I apologize, if anybody reads this and it brings back memories of disowned friendships. I am not so good at poetry, so this is my first time submitting a piece, do tell me about your views and feedback in the comment section ( i would love to read some advice and sincerely learn from them).

Here is another song recommendation to make your day better: ''I'm so tired'' by Lauv ( his name is lauv, he spreads love). Have a great day!

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Missclicked

Hey fella! welcome to my blog or you could say a little window into my thoughts. Here I will be writing about various topics like, life experiences, short fictions, poems and sometimes a little insights to my life. I hope we all get along!

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Comments (6)

  • Jay Kantor12 months ago

    Dear Ms. Click - I'm told we have a mutual admirer in Doc Sherwood - Wondered where he wandered off to - - Always my pleasure - Jay

  • Novel Allen12 months ago

    I found another Cebellen. I love your unique style and open statements that utters another sentiment or thought. This is really great.

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    This was great. I love the honesty, the hope and you beautifully described the heartache that comes from friends who break things off, often without rhyme or reason to why they have done it.

  • Your poem was awesomeeee! It did bring back some memories but nothing too unpleasant. Loved your poem!

  • Mohammad Yusuf12 months ago

    Marvelous🖤🖤 makes emotional.. It ends so fast... Literally I was hoping for more lines and don't wanna comeback from the past...

  • Eshita Bhati12 months ago

    This feels so mischievous to read it. Like you want to continue, but simultaneously, want to be away from those memories. 😶.. But you have really done a great job. ❤❤

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