my left leg fell off in bed the other night
fell off and disappeared as well
i haven’t the foggiest about where it went
it’s not here so only that i can tell
i turned my lamp on so i could see
but my leg was nowhere to be seen
and what struck me as really strange
was the spot where it once had been
i had to hop around to my partners side
i tried to wake her, i tried to tell her
but she just lay there pretending that she died
(not to be put off in anyway by the current state of affairs i told her…)
no more jumping through hoops i said
no more running around
no more walking it off
i’m gonna try and stand my ground
no more jumping to conclusions
no more dancing just twirling in place
no more dashing for hopes i said
no more leaps of faith
no jogging, no more stepping
look at me now not so slick
all i got in me's a coupla hops
cut to the chase and the quick
meanwhile my leg had neither
popped out, reappeared or grown back
i'm beginning to take it personally now
like some sort of ludicrous limb loss lack
i didn't even have a little leg
where the old one used to be
gonna have to sell all of my pants
cause they're no good to me
half my shoes are useless too
and all my fuckin jocks (undies)
but the silver lining to this legless mess
is that i now have twice as many socks
everyone calls me Hoppy now
my favourite song is Jump
(Not the Pointer Sisters! )
i am real funny if i drink too much
and i never take the hump
so if you see me at woolies
please kindly stand aside
the trolley helps me keep my balance
but the hop and shop kills my pride
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Brenton F
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Comments (4)
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😂🍷. Definitely in the surreal poetry column. I love this. I had to smile at the various puns and jokes inherent in your tale. Brilliant.