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Left Feeling Salty

Exposed feelings leave to feelings of exposure

By Thavien YliasterPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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Left Feeling Salty
Photo by Federico Enni on Unsplash

There was once a man who dated the sea

He courted her often upon his steed

Once he had her betrayed

She had him flayed

And that's the birth of the Nuckelavee

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Thavien Token's: This limerick has been crafted for Mother Combs' Limerick Challenge.

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Nicely done

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    I should have been born in Scotland. They have the best monsters there. I enjoyed learning about another one in the video, and I enjoyed the limerick. Well done, Thavien.

  • This is like the awesomest of the most awesome limericks! I came to know about Nuckalavee from Novel's story. Thanks for embedding that YouTube video! It's so weird for something so terrifying to be afraid of water.

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    almost a chilling limerick. Nuckelavee is scary

  • Veronica Coldiron7 months ago

    I love it when I'm reading for enjoyment and learn new things! I had never heard of a Nuckelavee. Thanks for sharing the link! This is a great limerick. I've never been any good at writing these and I admire your versatility!

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