Labyrinth of Dreams
(unofficial) February Challenge by Randy Baker
Since my 2024 goal is to improve my writing, every upcoming challenge is absolutely welcomed. And ever since I started writing, I loved the opportunities writing prompts can provide.
Labyrinth of Dreams
In the moonlit night, a whisper's grace
A serenade of stars, an astral embrace
Through the labyrinth of dreams, we chase
A cascade of wishes, an ethereal trace.
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A serenade of stars, an astral embrace
Velvet darkness cloaks the enigma's dance
A cascade of wishes, an ethereal trace
In the silent maze, where shadows enhance.
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Velvet darkness cloaks the enigma's dance
A labyrinth of secrets, an elusive trance
In the silent maze, where shadow enhance
Lost in time's old mist, a mystic advance.
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A labyrinth of secrets, an elusive trance
Through the labyrinth of dreams, we chase
Lost in time's old mist, a mystic advance
In the moonlit night, a whisper's grace.
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Christian Bass
An author, who writes tales of human encounters with nature and wildlife. I dive into the depths of the human psyche, offering an insights into our connection with the world around us, inviting us on a journeys.
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Comments (4)
like each step is a step closer to solving a maze, emerging to freedom at last. Each verse a win.
I though these were powerful stanzas like the sonnet form
Wow, this is powerful.
I loved it! Well written!