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Labyrinth of Dreams

(unofficial) February Challenge by Randy Baker

By C.B. VisionsPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Labyrinth of Dreams
Photo by Aziz Acharki on Unsplash

Since my 2024 goal is to improve my writing, every upcoming challenge is absolutely welcomed. And ever since I started writing, I loved the opportunities writing prompts can provide.

Labyrinth of Dreams

In the moonlit night, a whisper's grace

A serenade of stars, an astral embrace

Through the labyrinth of dreams, we chase

A cascade of wishes, an ethereal trace.

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A serenade of stars, an astral embrace

Velvet darkness cloaks the enigma's dance

A cascade of wishes, an ethereal trace

In the silent maze, where shadows enhance.

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Velvet darkness cloaks the enigma's dance

A labyrinth of secrets, an elusive trance

In the silent maze, where shadow enhance

Lost in time's old mist, a mystic advance.

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A labyrinth of secrets, an elusive trance

Through the labyrinth of dreams, we chase

Lost in time's old mist, a mystic advance

In the moonlit night, a whisper's grace.

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Thank you for reading. Every feedback is welcomed, so feel free to let me know, how you liked what you just read. And if your time's allowing it, be welcomed to check out my other creations here on vocal.

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About the Creator

C.B. Visions

An author, who writes tales of human encounters with nature and wildlife. I dive into the depths of the human psyche, offering an insights into our connection with the world around us, inviting us on a journeys. (Christian Bass)

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  • Novel Allen4 months ago

    like each step is a step closer to solving a maze, emerging to freedom at last. Each verse a win.

  • Chloe Gilholy4 months ago

    I though these were powerful stanzas like the sonnet form

  • Anna 4 months ago

    I loved it! Well written!

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