Just One Night More
All I feel is Electricity
We both have the same idea about love
Eating pizza out of the box,
and I've got plenty of blankets to keep you warm
You tell me everything you're not,
but all I feel is electricity,
and I'm still in shock
Plug your charger into the wall
Promise me you'll stay
Just one night more
Crossed words
Please don't shout,
cause I know you hate it
When the Dog is too loud,
but I wouldn't be without you at all
Please stay
If only for one night more
We know this works when push comes to shove
Eating pizza out of the box,
and I've got plenty of patience more than I should
You tell me everything is wrong,
but all I see is simplicity,
and I'm still In shock
Plug your charger into the wall
Promise me you'll stay
Just one night more
Crossed words
Please don't shout,
cause I know you hate it
When the Dog is too loud,
but I wouldn't be without you at all
Please stay
If only for one night more
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Frankie Martinelli
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I really like this. It’s abstract yet the repetition paints a very clear image of a relationship potentially on the rocks, which is what makes the speaker’s plea so poignant. Well done!
Fantastic love poem!!! From the heart, this was beautifully & wonderfully written!!!
This should have more reads. Hopefully that will happen since it's been featured on Cendrine's post. Well done!