I am captivated by your eyes.
Your skin is extremely soft, like a sponge.
I can feel your breath on my neck.
The emotion alters my entire mood.
My body shivers, after you've touched me.
Your height draws me in.
I can tell you are naughty, just by looking at you.
Your perfume drives me mad.
each time you kiss me, I get lost.
I become lost in your body and touch.
You meet my demands.
Everything seems wonderful.
The way you caress me, carries me beyond,
to the land of lovemaking
the land where all is forgotten.
My heartbeat adds to my love for you.
My love for you will come to an end
when my heart stops beating.
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Very hear-touching words. Brilliant work!
My heart would beat to the rhythm of his name hehehehehe. Loved your poem!
It's beautiful! I love it!