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Just a Cheap Bottle of Make Believe

Vintage make’s it feel like years ago, yet it was just a year

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Just a Cheap Bottle of champagne

The rain falls like stale champagne,

Flat, tasteless, a fizz long gone —

A refreshment full of lost hope,

Poured out, forgotten.

Inside, I drown in whispers,

Promises to love me —

Not kept, just dusted away,

Like a money-off label

Peeling at the corners.

A summer wedding,

Falsely advertised,

A bubbly start turned

Secondhand trash.

Smash the bottle,

Christen the ship —

But you’ll never sail in her again.

It takes two ingredients

To make a good vintage:

A strong crop

And a patient hand.

hold on is that just for wine?

We were neither.

Just a cheap bottle

Of make believe tormented

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk