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"Journey to the Land of Golden Sun"

"Finding Courage to Follow Dreams"

By Ahmed RazaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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"Amidst the golden fields, she stood with a heart full of dreams, ready to embark on a journey of a lifetime."

In the land of the golden sun, Where the rivers flow and the flowers run, Lived a young girl with eyes of blue, And a heart that longed for something true.

She roamed the fields and danced with the breeze, Dreaming of adventures and journeys overseas, But the world outside was unknown and vast, And she feared that her dreams wouldn't last.

One day, a stranger came to town, With a smile that chased away her frown. He spoke of places she had never seen, Of mountains tall and oceans serene.

He took her hand and led her away, On a path that led to a brighter day. Through forests dense and valleys green, They journeyed on, a wondrous scene.

And though they faced many trials and fears, They held on tight, and shed no tears. For they knew that with every step they took, Their bond grew stronger, like a sacred book.

And so they traveled on and on, Until the day the girl had grown. And though she left the stranger behind, She carried with her memories of a kind.

For in the land of the golden sun, She found the courage to become someone. Someone who would follow her dreams, And journey on, wherever the path may seem.

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Ahmed Raza

"Unlocking the beauty of words, I paint vivid landscapes with ink, crafting my tales and verses to stir souls and ignite the imagination. I am Ahmed Raza, an enchanting weaver of words, a writer, and a poet.

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  • WAQAS ASHRAFabout a year ago

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