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JAZZY

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By Babs IversonPublished 2 months ago โ€ข Updated 2 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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JAZZY
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Jazz

Joyful, jazzy

Jittering, jostling, jiggling

Jukebox, jeep, jazzmen, jitterbug

Jocular, jovial

Jumping, jesting, jerking

Jive.

W๏ปฟriter's notes: This poem is submitted to the Tautogam Challenge. JAZZY is written in a diamante poem format.

What is a Diamante poem? Is a style of poetry consisting of seven lines. The lines form a diamond shape. The first and seventh lines have one word. While in the Synonym Diamante poem, the first line word and seventh line word are the same or similar, in the Antonym Diamante poem the words first line word and the seventh line word are opposites.

Did you notice that lines one four, and seven are all nouns? In lines, two and six two adjectives are used with three verbs are used in lines three and five.

A special shout-out to Denise Lindquist for sharing and introducing me to the poetry style.

Thank you for reading! You are appreciated!

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Brilliant! Awesome job!

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Hey don't encourage Vocal peeps, this sounds complicated. Have to get over tautograms first. Loved it.

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Now this was good and once again you add a lesson for all of us

  • Whoaaaa, a Diamante Tautogram! You're so creative!

  • Call Me Les2 months ago

    Oo a second layer to the tautogram! You brought it Babs! Way to go!

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    This is well written and the structure is so cool! Good job!

  • Jumpin' good time!

  • Shane Dobbie2 months ago

    Like this challenge wasnโ€™t hard enough, you have to go and raise the bar ๐Ÿ˜„

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Simply delightful! Wonderful poem! ๐Ÿ˜

  • Mohamed Jakkath2 months ago

    Great job on your poem, Babs Iverson! Your use of language and structure in the diamante poem format is impressive. The word "Jazzy" perfectly captures the lively and energetic spirit of jazz music, and your use of descriptive words and verbs adds depth to the poem. Keep up the good work and keep exploring different poetry styles!

  • Veronica 2 months ago

    poetry & jazz...my two absolute favorites! Love it โฃ๏ธ

  • Dean F. Hardy2 months ago

    Might play with that style myself soon, Babs

  • Cendrine Marrouat2 months ago

    Well done Babs!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Nicely done.

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    What a joy!! My son plays in a jazz band and loves it! I enjoyed the afterwards as well. Wonderful work!!

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Thanks for sharing both this poem and the information on the format!

  • You had me with the title Jazzy. I'm a big fan of jumping jive, swing, jitterbug and all that jazz. You did a great job with this tautogram and diamante form. Outstanding. I am familiar with all the terms you used. I really loved this.

  • J. S. Wade2 months ago

    Jovial judges justifiably joyous. ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Just Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ โค๏ธโœจ

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    You are great at this ๐Ÿฅฐ

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