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Jade Elizabeth

Villanelle Tribute to you

By Shirley BelkPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Jade Elizabeth

Serendipitous amazement, your assignment so bright

A vision of beauty, sheer joy, true delight

Angels & demons for your heart...did they fight

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Serendipitous amazement, your assignment so bright

You soared to the city and and the simple left sight

Until days became dark and nights had no light

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Angels & demons for your heart...did they fight

The struggle and battles became stronger in might

You ran and you cursed, life was all wrong and nothing was right

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You moved to the coast where you reached a new height

For awhile you found solace and worked out of your plight

Serendipitous amazement, your assignment so bright

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Angels & demons for your heart...did they fight

Chaos and hurt brings evil shadows to the night

Tormentors sought hard to snuff out your light

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We lost you at twenty-two years of age that night

Angels & demons for your heart...did they fight

And Heaven opened its doors to you and your light

Serendipitous amazement, your assignment so bright

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True story of my beautiful grandchild who died from a heroin overdose. She touched many lives with her beautiful self, but left much too soon... her short assignment on earth brought love and joy.

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About the Creator

Shirley Belk

Mother, Nana, Sister, Cousin, & Aunt who recently retired. RN (Nursing Instructor) who loves to write stories to heal herself and reflect on all the silver linings she has been blessed with

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  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    A beautiful tribute, Shirley. I'm hugging you now after reading that.

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    Beautiful poem for your grand child. I am sorry for you loss 😔

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    ❤💔

  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    So powerful! I am so sorry for the loss of your granddaughter!! There is way too much of that going on.😭❤️

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    An impactful and emotional poem. Good work Shirley. A line that stood out ..“ Angels & demons for your heart...did they fight” .. sometimes things are sadly out of our control. 😔 Best wishes sent!

  • Jay Kantor4 months ago

    Dear Shirley - I'm at a loss for words; how does one explain these horrible tragedies? Our Vocal Village Dr. Donna L. Roberts just wrote a narrative about the 'Stages' of anxiety. Feelings of hopelessness and despair that oftentimes escape from reality, even for a moment, seems to be the only answer. As a writer, you write, on any topic as though you are just talking to us; we all feel this with you. - Always with my Respect - Jay, Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -

  • Lamar Wiggins4 months ago

    Sorry for your loss, Shirley. The words you chose to share paints beauty inside and out. “And Heaven opened its doors to you and your light” simply beautiful. 🙏🏾💖

  • I am so sorry for your loss. This was a beautiful tribute.

  • Beautiful villanelle Shirley. I am so sorry to hear about your beautiful grand daughter.

  • k eleanor4 months ago

    May her light continue to shine in the hearts she touched. I'm truly sorry for your loss shirley🥺🥺 Sending lots of love! ❤️🫂

  • I'm so sorry for your loss Shirley 🥺 Jade was so beautiful. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Oh Shirley, this is a heartwrenchingly, beautiful, Villanelle tribute to your precious granddaughter, Jade Elizabeth. It brought tears to my dry eyes. Touching conclusion. "And Heaven opened its doors to you and your light Serendipitous amazement, your assignment so bright." My prayers are with all of you that she left behind.

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