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It's Gneiss to Meet You

by Call Me Les 24 days ago in nature poetry
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A little poem about mountainous geology and the glittering effect of sunlight on metamorphic rock.

Author's photo of a schist.

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Born in dark decay.

Rise! mica microcosm,

Covet sun no more.

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~Haiku written for the "High-Ku" Challenge on Vocal Media.

November 14, 2022 by Call Me Les

nature poetry

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Call Me Les

She/her | Cat enthusiast | "Word-Nerd" | Fueled by buttertarts

  • Co-Founding admin at Vocal Social Society & Great Incantations
  • Co-Founder of the Vocal Creators Chronicle
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  • Book: Owl in a Towel

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No words left unspoken.

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  • Cathy holmes22 days ago

    Ooh, this great; and right up you're alley. Well done

  • A Perfect Haiku Geological Wonder This Really Rocks Les Great Haiku This is just to correct the spelling mistakes and properly format my previous comment

  • Jordan Twiss23 days ago

    I love how this is personal for you, but in such a different way from other people's more personal entries. Excellent work!

  • Max Russell23 days ago

    Beautiful haiku, and a great accompanying photo!

  • Amy Writes23 days ago

    Really cool concept!

  • A Perfet Haiku - Geological Wonder - This Really Rock Les Great Haiku

  • sleepy drafts24 days ago

    This is stunning! I also * love * how you added your expertise as a geologist to this poem. I've been looking forward to your entry for this challenge and (unsurprisingly) I love it.💖❤️ Thank you for writing and sharing this!

  • Morgana Miller24 days ago

    The mica crystals deserve their day in the sun! <3 So glad I get to enjoy your geologist brain in this challenge.

  • Camilla Richter24 days ago

    Ooh I love this one! You reeled me in with a pun and then you delivered beautifully. Bravo!

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