When the spaceship splashes down in a fanfare
of eerie sounds into the lake, I share
an incredulous look with my dog Leo
while on our walk, which seems to ask: "Is this real?"
* * *
A door collapses inwards and stairs wend
their way to the shore. I tend
to think of aliens as little green men
but these creatures are different.
* * *
I'm not sure how they communicate
without mouths. But somehow, they translate
their desire to find the best that our planet
has to offer on their short visit.
* * *
I wrack my brain to narrow down
the many choices around town.
Food is out, unfortunately, since they have no mouth
and tropical island getaways are too far south.
* * *
Music concerts are hard to get into even
for humans, and I don't believe in
waiting at the long lines in Disneyland--
I don't think they'd understand.
* * *
I look down at Leo again and he looks up at me,
and the concept becomes apparent very easily.
I let them pet my dog and he licks their hand
and I think in the end, the visitors understand.
* * *
Love is a concept that you can't see or touch--
The best of what Earth offers, and I told them as much.
There's nothing better to show in the end
than the love of humanity's loyal best friend.
About the Creator
Alison McBain
Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/
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Comments (8)
Congratulations on a fine entry and placing in the challenge, very much deserved! Petting dogs is a universal pure goodness! Love it!
Congratulations on runner up!!!
a fine sentiment, Alison.
I submitted a dog one too. Aren't they just awesome!! 😊🥰 This is WONDERFUL! Congratulations!!
Nothing purer than petting a dog. Great work!
Very nice. Congrats
annnnnd off to go pet my pup. Congrats on the well-deserved award!
Nice📝🧡✌️