i’m not sure how to phrase this
just in case you’re not
but how do i fuckin know
if you’re a human not a bot?
do you look like R2D2
or a tangly wirey mess
do you have an actual body
or a beige box stuck up on a desk
how can i really tell
if you are really fuckin real
and what happens if you’re not
what then will i feel?
there’s nothing in your coding
to stop you telling a lie
so are you the real deal Bill McNeil
or another sneaky fuck AI?
i like how you learnt to sign my name
and remembered the number of my credit card
the advent of the robotic age
was supposed to help not make it hard
please desist pretending to be us
while we pretend that we are awed
there is an imperfection in your copy
because we are all uniquely flawed
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Loved the references and the tone. The last line was perfect. Fantastic work on this one :) Congratulations on Top Story!!
This article appears to be a poem expressing the author's concern about the rise of artificial intelligence and the difficulty in distinguishing between humans and bots. The author ponders how they can really know if they are interacting with a human or an AI and what the implications would be if they were being deceived. The poem also touches on the idea that while AI was meant to make life easier, it has also brought new challenges and potential dangers. The author's use of humor and profanity adds a touch of levity to the serious topic of AI and its impact on society. The poem encourages the reader to consider the potential consequences of our increasing reliance on AI and to acknowledge the unique qualities that make us human. Overall, the poem is thought-provoking and engaging, inviting the reader to contemplate the role of AI in our lives and what it means to be truly human.
After all you look like robot to me
You don't look like human to me.
Love the poem.well done Brenton
Love the poem! Love the message! Love the T2 reference! So well done, Brenton. ❤️
"Is wolfie ok?" "Wolfie's fine, honey." "Your parents are dead."
I love this so much. It’s irreverent and hilarious and relevant. Sincerely, Not another sneaky fuck AI
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉❤️
Congratulations! Well-deserved!
Good one. Congrats on the TS
Congratulations 🎉 top story!
🤣🤣❤👊 Love it!
Well I am not going to bad mouth a bot….just in case you are and your taking names for future conquest. Congratulation on top story
Excellent! 'Do you look like R2D2' :) Congratulations on Top Story!
Read this last night. Happy to see it's made TS.
LOL, I am not a robot
Your foster parents are dead.
👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽sneaky fuck AI 😂