Why is a relationship unpleasant after marriage?
All of a sudden, we feel insecure. Lacking confidence.
Our relationship is something we shouldn’t disparage.
When does it become challenging to cherish?
We start asking ourselves if it’s just pretense.
Why is a relationship unpleasant after marriage?
We try to be blind, ignoring the clear message,
the clear message that love needs to make sense,
Our relationship is something we shouldn’t disparage.
Feeling like we are in complete wreckage.
When does loyalty stop being immense?
Why is a relationship unpleasant after marriage?
Moments of insecurities shouldn’t lead to discourage,
Is it bad to offer a love that’s intense?
Our relationship is something we shouldn’t disparage.
What we wish to prevent is having emotional baggage,
Marriage is not worth it if all that’s left are arguments.
Why is a relationship unpleasant after marriage?
Our relationship is something we shouldn’t disparage.
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Diani Alvarenga
“I write to give myself strength. I write to be the characters that I am not. I write to explore all the things I'm afraid of.”
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Very nicely done.
I guess because people stop putting in the effort they did before. A very thought provoking poem!