Invisible
Are you Invisible, or can I see
the you behind the curtain?
Can I feel the tears you cry
when the stage is gone
and it's just you?
Will I be there for you
the way I was before
I knew?
Or, will you
become a fleeting notion
a quick bow to PRIDE
to show I cared?
Will things change between us?
Will you keep me outside
a place you're not sure
I can go?
I can't help, admiring
the courage you found
to tell me the first time
not knowing how I would
React.
When I ask
you say, I'm fine
but I think
there are still doors
you haven't trusted me
to open.
When I say, I love you
the you, you are
do you believe me?
Acceptance is a gift
not just from me
but you as well.
If I made you feel
invisible,
I’m sorry.
The world still drops
from under my feet
when I think of
the night
on the phone
you told me
I tried to end my life.
I would never be okay
AGAIN,
If you were gone.
Are
You
Invisible?
Keep asking
Because you deserve
To be seen, for
Who
You
Are
To be remembered
Not for a month, or a year
But a whole life.
You
Are
A
Rainbow
I Love you
I see you
I
Am
Proud
Of
YOU
About the Creator
The Invisible Writer
"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
Charles Bukowski
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Comments (8)
This was so beautiful! I feel like you reached into my soul and gave me a hug, I feel uplifted, enlightened and loved after reading this! This was breath taking, Will!
This was so touching and emotional! Very well done!
You said so much in this. Beautiful, raw, real, ugly, broken, loved. Thank you for sharing this emotional piece.
Wow, very emotional piece. So needed by many. You are not invisible.
Good job!!! Very meaningful and sincere.
Love this Powerful Piece❤️💚💛💙💜🧡
This is so beautifully expressed. I can feel every single word here. Wonderfully done!
Beautifully said. Love it.