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inhabitant soul

the sound of emptiness

By chaimaa alidrissiPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
this poem speaks about the journey im going through it communicates themes of love, regret, and melancholy, with a tone that evokes a sense of inevitable loss and introspection. The contrast between the initial sense of comfort and the subsequent realization of doom adds to its emotional depth. Overall, it's a poignant and evocative piece that delves into the intricacies of human emotion and experience

In your existence I felt like home,

with your touches I filled the void within my soul,

for u I wrote verses of things I wanted to explore, yet who was I in your presence that has always been doomed

Soo many voices told me to stop and let go,

thinking of diving an ocean as deep as a black hole

hiking carelessly in a Hollow Mountain chamber with soo much barrenness that withdraws, pure energy and feeds its inhabitant cavity

massive silence, and noisy emptiness, millennia of wind ebbing away sincerity

guilt, regrets, and love sorrow, themes of a poem I doubted rhyming

a melancholic elegy, dull and dark melody,

for which i thought, purity could never be tainted, and for which i believed darkness can be refined.

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chaimaa alidrissi

a poet who’s language is expressing emotions through rhyming words 🤎

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