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Incertitude

Principle of progress

By DamianPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Perfectionist, the title given,

To the pretense of a distinct man.

What, why or who could he be?

Questions he asked himself in the dead of dark.

From the lay man, a special soul,

Characterized by his kind demeanor.

To him, nothing,

Hidden by a compassionate personality.

A lost being in the passions of earth,

Isolating the senses he possessed.

He wished for nothing, but a sense of purpose.

A path or direction to clarity, his utmost desire.

All things change at the spark of consciousness.

Was he to be stopped now?

For he began the journey of a thousand strides,

Hoping on every step for clarity to set in.

On his advance he wept,

For in as much as everything he wanted came near,

The incertitude of a man crept in.

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Damian

My mind is a universe of its own and I'm going to tell you all about it's stories

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  • Test3 months ago

    This piece of writing was exceptional. I thoroughly enjoyed it

  • Anna 3 months ago

    This was really emotional! A lot of people underestimate men's feeling but they don't know how wrong they are.

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