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In roots of Maple tree

to my love

By Salomé SaffiriPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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In roots of Maple tree
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I placed you, tightly wrapped in shirt,

In roots of maple tree

When it’s my time to lie in dirt

I hope you’ll wait for me

*

I think through heavy clouds of grief

Of things that we’ve been through..

Your soul glides down as maple leaf;

Of course I’ll wait for you

*

I listen with the opened mind

Past what the eye can see

For answer that I hope to find:

I hope you’ll wait for me

*

Your body lies in roots beneath,

Caressed by morning dew

You whisper in the summer breeze

Of course I’ll wait for you

*

Like wind that rustles in the trees

Your soul is running free

Unbound by body, filled with ease

I know you'll wait for me

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About the Creator

Salomé Saffiri

Writing - is my purpose. I feel elated when my thoughts assume shapes, and turn into Timberwolves, running through the snowbound planes of fresh paper, leaving the black ink of their paw prints behind.

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  • E.K. Daniels4 months ago

    “Your soul glides down in maple leaf”—what beautiful imagery and metaphor. Lovely piece.

  • Awww, Lisa 🥺❤️ Your poem was so poignantly beautiful! I loved it with all my heart!

  • John Cox4 months ago

    This is a beautiful, lyrical elegy, Salome! Absolutely heartbreaking. 😢

  • Alyssa Nicole4 months ago

    This is such a lovely and heartfelt dedication. Your writing is beautiful!

  • Joe Patterson4 months ago

    Beautifully conceived.

  • J4 months ago

    I don't know why your work keeps reminding me of her (yes, I do), but another Ani song popped into my head reading this. 'Hearse', this time. Thank you for moving me, yet again.

  • Beautiful

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