Bring me to the place you’ve dreamed
of. The bed upstairs,
the raft in the cool, still lake.
Peach juice, sticky sweet, running
down my cheeks, my thighs.
Dab it with the linen sheet.
A current in the water
pulls the pit, spits it
on the beach. Another rock.
I want more days like this, please.
Swaying to a stop,
licking til it hurts your tongue.
Worry the sand in the crease.
Flip the table, if
you so hate the way it's set.
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