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I'm, Proper Dancing

Day 21 of 50 days of senryu inspired by songs

By Paul StewartPublished about 11 hours ago • 1 min read
I'm, Proper Dancing
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I'm too old for this

Worry of who will say what

Let's dance everywhere

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This is inspired by Alyson Smith's challenge to write a haiku a day for 50 days, inspired by songs and lyrics that are special to her.

For Day 21 of my own challenge I've opted for the funkiest and best Electric Six other than Gay Bar.

It's silly but, Dick Valentine's vocals and performance always makes me smile and hey we should just all dance whenever we want. The world would be a better place if we did.

Anyway, enjoy, Improper Dancing. One of my favourite bits is the "stop - continue" section.

Please check out some of the many other people taking part in this challenge, some of whom have already finished.

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Paul Stewart

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    Written by Paul Stewart