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Ill Again

By Tornvec

By Tørnvec™Published 2 months ago 1 min read
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Love, I’ve fallen ill again.

I’m in need of your medicine.

Come and place your healing hands on me.

Baby, be my remedy.

Prescribe me some of your oxytocin.

Boost my serotonin.

I need a full dosage to fight this diagnosis.

Won’t you stay a moment?

Lend me your love potion.

Well chosen.

You got all the right components.

You keep my heart in motion.

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About the Creator

Tørnvec™

With every word written, I breathe easier.

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