If they come, you must build
Playing with the Villanelle
If they come, you must build
A person is not a weed
Humanity is your guild
~.~
Why should blood be spilled?
Time, it is to feed
If they come, you must build
~.~
The burned, the wheeled, the skilled
The wall is a ruthless breed
Humanity is your guild
~.~
Crowns are inkless and quilled
Power is not a creed
If they come, you must build
~.~
Metal has been tilled
It’s not too late to seed
Humanity is your guild
~.~
Greatness has not been killed
Your history is your deed
If they come, you must build
Humanity is your guild
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Matthew Daniels
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I'm here to explore the natures of stories and the people who tell them.
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We'z Walking on a Path Ruled By Numbers
This road has felt endless, yet limited; every step tracked. Inching away along this path, I feel trapped. Confined. Left to this narrow passage that may one day amount to something greater. Time is not a concept. Only distance. From start to finish, I laugh and cry and attempt to convince myself that this is worth it. I cannot stray. I must keep going. Every step etched, is a step taken, is measured as more than before. I cannot even recall how I got here. Maybe I don’t even really exist. Just another tick marking off a perceived presence. Of what though? I am just another line drawn. Nothing more, nothing less.
By Oneg In The Arctic3 days ago in Fiction
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Nice one, Matthew. Congrats on your top story!
This is thought provoking. Loved it! Especially this line 'Crowns are inkless and quilled' Congratulations on top story!!🎉
So many powerful and thought-provoking lines! Brilliant villanelle!
You successfully played with the villanelle alright. This reminded me of several things, but mostly felt like an invitation to interact and possibly collaborate with whoever 'they' are. Well done and congrats!!!
Matthew this was incredibly powerful with the repetitive language and though provoking themes. Great work and congrats on Top Story!
"A person is not a weed Humanity is your guild" Wonderful poem! I like the way you played with the language in your poem!
Clever, leaving this open to interpretation. Let the reader guess or decide who ‘they’ are. Congratulations
1. This line is so eloquent and clever: "Crowns are inkless and quilled" 2. I recognize the inversion of "if you build it, he will come" from Field of Dreams, but I'm now pondering—Is "they" a reference to "humanity," and therefore this poem speaks to the ways in which we are all somewhat spiritually indebted to one another, or is "they" a common enemy (the powers that be... or, you know, aliens!!) and the poem is a gentle rally cry? Or something else entirely? Would love to know your intent, if you're willing to share. Really loved the way you played with layered language and made me think.
This is wonderful Villanelle poem 👌🏽
Back to say...well done and congrats on Top Story! That was bloody fast, too! haha! Well done!
Oooh, love this! Well done on a sterling entry for the challenge. Very thought-provoking!