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If The World Ended

A limerick

By Shane DobbiePublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read

I wonder if your world ended,

Would you know unless it trended,

Too distracted by flim-flam,

Like who’s playing Batman,

To see your brain has been blended.

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Shane Dobbie

If writing is a performance art then I’m tap dancing in wellies.

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  • The Invisible Writer3 months ago

    It doesn’t exist if it’s not on social media 😬

  • This is soooo true!

  • C. H. Richard3 months ago

    Sad but possibly true for many! Nice play on term flim-flam too! Well done ! ☘️

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh3 months ago

    Blended brains ... flim-flam ... such creative use of language to drive home an important point. Well done.

  • Ahna Lewis3 months ago

    Nicely done! And regretfully quite accurate to our modern world!

  • Jordan Twiss3 months ago

    This poses an excellent question, and definitely reflects the absurdity of our world. Well done!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    blended, indeed. Well done.

  • Caroline Jane3 months ago

    Ha ha! "Flim-flam" needs to be used more in writing!

  • Eugenette Morin3 months ago

    Yep.. great social commentary on this one

  • PK Colleran3 months ago

    Clever social commentary. Love it.

  • Donna Renee3 months ago

    I think you’ve hit the “absurdities of life” part of the challenge pretty darn well in this

  • Holly Pheni3 months ago

    Very creative!

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago


  • Quincy.V3 months ago

    This poem humorously points out the overwhelming influence of social media on our attention and priorities.

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