If The World Ended
A limerick
I wonder if your world ended,
Would you know unless it trended,
Too distracted by flim-flam,
Like who’s playing Batman,
To see your brain has been blended.
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Shane Dobbie
If writing is a performance art then I’m tap dancing in wellies.
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Comments (14)
It doesn’t exist if it’s not on social media 😬
This is soooo true!
Sad but possibly true for many! Nice play on term flim-flam too! Well done ! ☘️
Blended brains ... flim-flam ... such creative use of language to drive home an important point. Well done.
Nicely done! And regretfully quite accurate to our modern world!
This poses an excellent question, and definitely reflects the absurdity of our world. Well done!
blended, indeed. Well done.
Ha ha! "Flim-flam" needs to be used more in writing!
Yep.. great social commentary on this one
Clever social commentary. Love it.
I think you’ve hit the “absurdities of life” part of the challenge pretty darn well in this
Very creative!
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This poem humorously points out the overwhelming influence of social media on our attention and priorities.