If our minds are seen 🤪
Then the trouble will be horrifying 🤣🤣🤣
An astounding creation,
By god Nature,
What is that?
Anybody can't read,
The thoughts of anyone,
Nobody can predict them,
I can't see yours,
And you can't see mine,
Imagine, just imagine,
If this is not the case,
Probably I will be thrown out of the house,
But no worries,
I know,
I am not the only black sheep,
Your best friends would slap on,
If they heard the disgusting sound,
Of your mind berates them,
Your girlfriend would break up,
If she read the love quotes,
You bear for other girls,
By unzipping your mind,
You would hack Dharrshee's mind,
And make a top story,
And when she knows it,
She would be ecstatic for copying her fancy,
It is hilarious,
And horrifying too,
When minding beyond the boundaries, isn't it,
So, let's breathe deep,
Inside our limits,
What is so-called,
Our minds aren't seen by others!
** I wanted to tell about general status, so this is invalid to the sacred people who enlightened their lives**
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Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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well writen
beautiful
Hmmm, Great poem.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Dharrsheena is the queen of Top stories!
Hahaha I agree, we need to hack her mind for Top Stories! Dharrsheena. 🤣😂 😂❤️💙💜
Beautiful poem!
Bro I'm glad you didn't mention me..Haha this is a truly a great experimental poetry Esala... Nice composition on feelings...
Great!
Great poem!❤️💖 This would be terrible though if it were real as I have had a glimpse of this in a college study once. I discovered dirty old men. I didn't know that would be the real outcome! 😂😂😂
You have wonderfully penned down each and every line ...it was really my best moment of the day...to read it.....🥇🥇
Amazing work
Your poem deeply resonated with Dharrsheena's thoughts and feelings. Loved your poem!
best
very good⭐
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wow..
Oh my goodness, for Dharr!! Very cute, I loved it!!
Your introspective exploration invites readers to ponder the complexities of the human mind and the delicate balance between transparency and privacy. Thanks for sharing!
Hahahahahahahahahahha anyone who hacks my mind would be traumatised for life 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Nice