I've Learned to Watch them Drown
RE: SURGENCE; poems about mental illness
I've learned to watch them drown -
those demons they call illness.
They used to swim freely
shore to shore
leaving steaming tracks
of fire and smoke
between the tiny chain islands
of sanity and perseverance.
Now they falter at the deep end
where the dark waters have been poisoned
by the chemicals I force fed
into my veins.
Sometimes I wonder
how much of this I can take
before I too choke on the fumes
left by the 'cures' to my affliction.
Am I still me, if I can't fight these demons alone?
Am I still me, if I need drugs to make me sane?
After all this time, it's still hard to say,
as my wounds have never properly healed -
only scarred over.
Yet, I would be remiss
if I did not admit
that every demon drowned
is another day of dry land
that I eagerly indulge in.
So, now I stand at the rocky shores
of my battered mind,
alone and war-ravaged,
but whole.
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The next poem will be the final piece of RE: SURGENCE.
This is the 20th poem in RE: SURGENCE, a poetry collection by Amanda Starks that shares what it's like to have and fight against mental illness in a free-form, lyrical prose.
Be aware that topics and themes may include suicide, self-harm, and isolation.
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Amanda Starks
Lover of the dark, fantastical, and heart-wrenching. Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
Comments (4)
I loved the imagery in this of a sort of dark archipelago where you're clinging, watching things trying to come and attack you. Very powerful and like something from a fantasy epic.
This one felt so personal to me as someone who has generalized anxiety and panic attacks. Really well done, Amanda
As a sufferer of mental illness, this gave me bittersweet chills. Stunning work. 😀
such a powerful poem!