I Sing an Ode To You
My delicious sin
You are there for me at every turn,
Every day,
You have my back,
In every way.
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When Iโm feeling dirty,
Youโre only too happy to please,
You meet my needs,
And do the job with ease.
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When Iโm horribly cold,
You infuse me with your heat,
Smother me in warmth,
The pleasure is a treat.
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When Iโm tired and lonely,
You infuse me with desire,
Wrap me in your cocoon,
A soothing pacifier.
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When Iโm hurting,
And struggling to sleep,
You cuddle me in comfort,
And hold me while I weep.
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When I canโt get comfortable,
And need an alternative bed,
You never complain of the hours,
But patiently work with me instead.
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When I feel the need to relax,
Spend time with you to unwind,
You never disappoint,
No, you are always so very kind.
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I love the day to day relationship
We have built together,
From day one I gave you my heart,
And promised you forever.
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I battle to overcome the excitement,
Every time we plan to meet,
I hurry home at the drop of a hat,
Desperately searching for your heat.
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Then I wander into your room,
And gaze upon you in awe,
Laying quietly, waiting patiently,
Knowing itโs you I just adore.
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As I turn your knob to high,
I sigh with relief,
And climb on in, curl up tight,
As you wrap me in your sheaf.
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I couldnโt survive without you,
Youโre such an intricate part of my day,
A necessity of high esteem,
What more can I say?
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I love when I slip within your heat,
Luxuriously melting in sheer glee,
Relaxing, pain free, warming,
Stimulating my pleasure reality.
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Youโre my delicious sin,
Without you Iโd be on the warpath,
As I sink into your depths,
I sing an ode to my fabulous bath.
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About the Creator
Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry โ itโs like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves โ Iโm just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Comments (5)
Oooo, such a lovely ode for a bath! It was so wonderful!
You had me soaking in your words from the very first, Colleen.
Wonderful job!
Colleen, this was marvelous!!! Superbly written!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Love it, I feel you on this one ๐ฅฐ