In a flash,
when the bird song was silenced,
when the wind ceased and watched,
when all horses paused neighing,
when all flowers failed to recall waving,
when the Pacific ocean held making waves,
when magma in Etna lost its mobility,
I saw you...
Yes, The Beautiful..it's you,
I saw you turned away,
your adorable face,
in case I spot you were looking at me..
Without any delay,
I saw you were smiling at me secretly..
Yes, The Beautiful I saw,
it was you.....
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P.A.Vinura Jayasanka
Hi! I'm an Engineering undergraduate who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects.You can follow me on fb:
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Comments (3)
Love how you stop time in such a monumental way.
Don’t forget to smile back. 😉 Hope you will be able to reach the next steps! Good luck to you 🫡
Laugh out loud! Short and sweet. Brother, I really like the way you joined nature for your poem. All when lines from 2 to 7 are mesmerizing. "I saw you were smiling at me secretly.." Haha... That's the point 😁😂😂!