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I Pray It Is Tame

for a while

By Sam Eliza GreenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2023
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I hope you find joy from the harvest you planted and forgiveness from the one you didn’t.

When your soil dries, I dream you’ll make time to water the lilies most days and learn to release the ones who couldn’t survive their newfound independence.

As the sweetness of blueberries and watermelons lures the wild in, I pray it is tame, for a while, upon your sacred land.

And on those afternoons, when all you want to do is dig a hole and plant your limbs deeply into the earth, desperate for rebirth, I wish you a peaceful slumber among the other roots eager to bloom.

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Sam Eliza Green

Wayward soul, who finds belonging in the eerie and bittersweet. Poetry, short stories, and epics. Stay a while if you're struggling to feel understood. There's a place for you here.

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  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Great work!

  • Feyre St. Clairabout a year ago

    Lovely read. Beautifully put together.

  • Linda Marryabout a year ago

    really beautiful :)

  • Allie Bickertonabout a year ago

    Beautiful!!! This summarizes human life so delicately and eloquently! Well done and congrats on top story!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    So beautiful, and that last line/paragraph was perfect. Well done :) Congratulations on the Top Story!

  • Shashaabout a year ago

    Peaceful memories nice writing

  • Kyannaabout a year ago

    So peaceful, the last paragraph is my favorite. It flows effortless.

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    What a beautiful to wish the earth good harvest ❤️

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    A very lovely blessing. Beautiful imagery.

  • Testabout a year ago

    How absolutely divine!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Lovely piece, enjoyed it a lot.

  • Oluwatoyin Adelekeabout a year ago

    I wish it continues

  • Oluwatoyin Adelekeabout a year ago

    Very interesting

  • Dean F. Hardyabout a year ago

    This is beautiful. So glad it got attention after a month of being published on the platform. Congrats.

  • Senaka Kulatungaabout a year ago

    nice

  • Stefany Scalesabout a year ago

    Very nice!

  • Fou Siya Fou Siyaabout a year ago

    Nice

  • Westen Rajabout a year ago

    nice

  • Sandeep Babyyabout a year ago

    Good 😊😊

  • Beautiful 😍 I hearted and Subscribed‼️💯🫶🏾🎊Congratulations

  • VIDHYASAGARabout a year ago

    I know Nature is always Ultimate to give positive and calm mind🌠🌠💝☺️

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    I don't know if you did or not, but turning this into a haiku for the previous haiku challenges would be awesome.

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    The fruits of our labors will either give us pain or something to savor. The fruits of one's labor will always attract others to the fray. It does not matter whether they are herbivores wishing to eat upon that was sowed, or predators that have come stalking the prey. It has always been the 'do's' from 'don'ts' and haves from 'have nots.' Since some have nothing and others have a lot. It's all a matter of survival of the fittest. No matter the strong, daring and bold are also in competition with the weak, timid, and skittish. As much as we wish to enjoy all the splendors of the lands A lot will only enjoy that which has been given and taken from the palm of their hands. There are those that wish to restart as something, someone, some being new. There's still much left in their current life that they must do. I thank You for Your words and what You must say. Just have others have done for me, for them I must go an pray.

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