I never liked my Mum’s But.
A poem by Ross E F LOMBARDI
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I never liked my Mum’s But.
By Ross E F LOMBARDI
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From the young age, I could listen and understand her words.
I never liked my mum’s “But…”
Look, Mum!
Look What I have done!
“That’s nice dear… But…”
And I could not understand why I did not want to play with that toy anymore.
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From the age, I could listen and understand my own thoughts.
I disliked my mum’s “But”
Look, Mother!
Look What I have tried to do!
“That’s nice love… But…”
And did not see why I did not want to try doing that project anymore.
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From an age, I could understand that I had feelings.
I dreaded my mum’s “But…”
Have a look at this if you have time…
It may not be worth it,
But this is what I have tried to do!
“It ok, I suppose, Son… But…”
And Just like that,
Randomly, and seemingly for no reason, I did not want to feel anymore.
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From that moment, I learned to forever hate myself.
I absolutely loathed my mum’s “But…”
Mother!
This is what I have done!
“You have done that… But…”
And I knew and understood why I refused to ‘be’… …anymore.
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About the Creator
Ross E Fortune Lombardi
Writer. Gamer, Goth
A (Constantly Failing To Be Funny) satirist!
Mutare non est meum
Cantus moriar
BLOG:
http://lombot.co.uk
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This was so heartbreaking! Very well written!