I loved you...
remorse in poetic form

I loved you
but I didn't know
how to show it
I always seemed
to blow it.
I loved you
your patience
and trust
but as usual
I was too much.
I loved you
your soft
sweet voice
but I pushed
so hard you really
had no choice.
I loved you
but I didn't
pay attention
to where we
were heading
and it was finally
the straw the
camel was dreading.
I loved you
but I didn't listen
now I'm all alone
and it's you
that I'm missing.
About the Creator
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Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me
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