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I Just Can’t

But I Can

By Moe RadosevichPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
I Just Can’t
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I can’t eat,

ain’t got no food, 🧐

can’t make out,

not in the mood, 🤷🏻‍♀️

can’t go to town,

my car is down, 😳

can’t top the hill,

done lost my will, 😡

but, can chug a beer,

I say,

hey, “beer here!” 😂😂

Don’t kick me out, just 😊 and think, he’s over the deep end, thanks for the read, hope ya got a chuckle, 😂😂


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Comments (6)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    Lol, that indeed made me chuckle! I had fun reading this!

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Lol. That was great.

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Funny and cute! Nice job, Moe! 🤗❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon 11 months ago

    Supercute! 😊

  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    A respectable talent, sir, as is your writing prowess! 🍻🍺

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    Love the rhythm, nicely done and very funny 😁🤩

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