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I can’t Focus

By Andrew D. Guillory "Drewspeaks"Published about a year ago 1 min read

Before we get into this..

Why is it so tough to write a subtitle for these stories??? Like you would think it’d just roll right off the tongue, but no. Not for me lol.

Ok, so here’s the poem:

concentration’s getting complicated with the swelling of your—

beauty striking me, but your curves do a different number,

if, I had the chance to wrap my hands around your—

heart so tender, large, and plentiful;

like your legs as they command attention from the drooling saint.

who fights temptation til he meets her, now he can’t control that urge to—

faint as he is deprived of a mild bite of your voluptuous..

you get it yet?

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Andrew D. Guillory "Drewspeaks"

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)about a year ago

    😊nice piece, I had a similar situation with subtitles so I started to create an extra sentence for my poem but I add it to the subtitle instead😉it works, or you could just explain what the poem is about.

Andrew D. Guillory "Drewspeaks"Written by Andrew D. Guillory "Drewspeaks"

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