I Am the Thing
You are never alone.
I am the thing that lurks in your home
What you hope not to see when you look in the mirror
I am all sinew and gristle, blood and bone
You feel me linger when you’re all alone
I never go far but I never get nearer
I am the thing that crawls in your home
You never will see me, if you refuse to be shone
Hold close your loved ones, and those you hold dearer
I am sinew and gristle, blood drenched bone
You thought you’d forget me once you were grown
But now that you’re older you sense me much clearer
I am the thing that writhes in your home
Breathe in your last of heady burial loam
I am your fate, no matter what path down you veer
I am all gristle and sinew, your sun bleached bone
Listen, what’s that sound? That deafening drone?
You can taste it now, the palpable fear here.
I am the thing that lurks in your home
Sinewed, and gristled, and all bloodied bone
About the Creator
Helen Seder
Art doesn’t need to be “good.” It just needs to be.
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Comments (11)
Beautifully creepy. Don't look under the bed.....this is fear personified.
creepy and brilliant
Wonderfully creepy! Well done!
Creepy, but also oddly beautiful. Well done!
Marvelous work! Keep it going—congrats!
Excellent poem
There is something about a villanelle that draws darkness out. This capitalises on this nature really well. It builds like all good horrors should. Well done!
Oooo, I loveeeeee how dark this was! Awesome Villanelle! Congratulations on your Top Story!
Ooo, I really liked the dark voice in this poem. Congrats!
Congratulations
Monster in the closet. Our dark side hidden where we sunk it real deep. It comes, it stays. It is really us dep, deep down. Lovely poem. Congrats.