I step out of my truck and smell the salty sea air
I feel the sun’s powerful rays warming my skin as I’m caressed by the light ocean breeze
My feet sink into the soft sand as I walk toward the water
I am met by the sun glistening off the water like a sea of floating sapphires
My first step into the cool water is shocking, but exhilarating
The gentle roar of the ocean murmurs in my ear as I walk along the shore
Golden flecks in the sand sparkle in the sunlight
The sun’s rays paint a pattern on the sand, broken up by the ripples on the water
I allow the healing power of the water to wash over and renew me
I am one with nature as I walk gently through the shallow water
Careful to avoid stepping on sand dollars, starfish and stingrays
I am a guest in their home
When I finish my walk I sit on the sand and watch the waves move slowly toward the shore
I sit in silence and allow myself to see, feel, and listen
In this place all is at peace
About the Creator
Dawn Salois
Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.
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