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I Am My Own Play

A Rondel; Prompted #3 Entry

By Lindsay SfaraPublished about a month ago Updated 28 days ago 1 min read
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I Am My Own Play
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An Entry for the April Prompted #3 Challenge below:

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This is my life, my tale, my stage.

Do you believe you direct it?

Your control is sourly unfit

to read my lines and turn the page.

.

Your influence is more a cage

that binds my light should I submit.

This is my life, my tale, my stage.

Do you believe you direct it?

.

Keep your place in my tale—backstage.

Your role is where I choose to knit

with woven words I deem befit.

I am my director, my sage.

This is my life, my tale, my stage.

surreal poetryStream of Consciousnesssocial commentaryMental Healthinspirational
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About the Creator

Lindsay Sfara

I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.

Follow my novel journey and more: linktr.ee/lindsaysfara

"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Dana Crandell24 days ago

    So well done, and powerful. Congratulations, Lindsay!

  • Christy Munson24 days ago

    Yes, sister, yes! Well written and impactful. Loved it. Congratulations on a richly deserved second place finish!

  • Lana V Lynx26 days ago

    So beautiful, forceful and empowering! Everyone who has a narcissistic partner should read that to themselves like a mantra.

  • Randy Baker26 days ago

    Congrats! You won 2nd place in the challenge.

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    I love this...this is my life, my tale, my stage.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is lovely. Well done, Lindsay.

  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    Its nice to read about you like this

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    With this confidence, a lot of people will gather around such a person.

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