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Hurries

A new style poem inspired by architecture. I call it "Boxcar poems."

By K.A. SmithPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Artist Statement: My new style, "Boxcar poems," is inspired by modular grids used in architecture.

Hurry Hurry Hurry

Hurry Hurry Hurry

Hurry Hurry Hurry

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Before it goes off,

It's live.

Can't rewind it.

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What did I miss?

What did I miss?

What did I miss?

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Something I saw.

Something I liked.

Wish I could go back.

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Waits Waits Waits

Waits Waits Waits

Waits Waits Waits

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Mom!

Moments...

On television again.

Thank you for reading!

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K.A. Smith

K. A. Smith – published author and poet with experience in architectural design. I try to bring love and life into every poem or story. I believe every piece of art is "effective" in some way. Please follow along, and share your thoughts.

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