How Fast Can You Get Undressed?
Not a Rhetorical Question...
shake off comfort-zone sedative sameness
unfasten rip off pull down undo
drop idiosyncrasies like nooobody’s business
disrobe unzip
unbutton ingrained beliefs
and cringe at the detritus tumble that follows
like you’ll never pick that up again
like every single liberation craved
from a bare soul /choked/on/successive/decades/of/constriction/
because from birth you were given this dress code
a one-size-fits-all
a standard uniform factory issue
a dictate rejected
as in
foot barely in the door
shoes and slogans thrown to floor
as in
who made up these stupid friggin’ rules
ill-fit t ing gar men t s
and non-constructive criticisms pinching and itchy
so relieved to be rid of
gone are public opinion hand-me-downs
that chafed sensitive body parts
and hurt like hell
you always
only wanted basics
itsy-bitsy essentials
uncomplications impossible to sweat in
airy fabrics easily discarded
biodegradable
i never
ever wanted lascivious looks
when my limbs leaned to light
via phototropic response
just gentle curiosity weary of seclusion
but
untethered intensity scares some people
gushes joyous rapture with travel by skin
not by sacrilege
multi-volume instruction manuals on acceptable apparel
written in fear
disguised as freedoms
brewed dissonance
a dichotomy of forward-backward-gas-brake-yes-no
dust collecting frustrations building urges rising
Somewhere
we dreamed of bliss and no woven barriers
delight and infinite vision holding hands
carefree and certain of self
with innocence a seal unbroken
and we knew
we just knew
that we were conceived and grew in secret for a reason
that the weight
of every “should” and “have to”
was a seductive straitjacket modeled as eye-catching regalia
we never had to wear
now
in knowledge of alignment
we shed past shame
tie dye iron-clad conformity
in vibrant shades of inner rebellion
a bona fide commitment
to remove each other’s threadbare shyness with gentle entreaty
keep watch at fireside
as exposed sensory receptors of us crave connection
we’re better at this now
bare divinity in a breath
yield held longings into life
scatter sensuous secrets secured and signed
to take off time’s tourniquet
and feel bodies without burden
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Comments (8)
Oooh, "to take off time’s tourniquet" I love it!
Marvelous, magnificent social commentary & inspirational words to liberate our minds and body!!! Bravo!!!❤️❤️💕
What a great ride that was. Exciting and liberating. Excellent work.
PHENOMENAL! Loved everything about this one! Go gurl!💪🏾
Mic drop! This was awesomeeee! I actually sang it as a song, lol! Really loved the rhythm it had to it!
Great writing here, Dani. May you be a quicker study on shedding such garments of needless inhibition than I.
This was like reading a slam poetry contest entry. A well deserved poem that spoke on high levels of information. I use my old analogy when it comes to Body types. "We often worn our flesh as scratch-off tickets in hopes to detach, but each time we peel off..it says PLEASE TRY AGAIN"
I LOVE this! Such an important message! This should be Top Story 👏🏼✨