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Holiday for Two

Finding peace where you are

By Judey Kalchik Published 4 months ago 1 min read
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Back from Midnight Mass,

blessings reflected,

O Holy Night sung.

Dishes are washed,

Presents all wrapped;

The stockings are hung.

Tree lights are on,

Coffee pot’s prepped,

In the window hangs Peace.

I pray that it’s true

As we sang last night

That oppression will cease.

Morning: Presents opened

Papers gathered

Breakfast done.

Facebook smiles

Families far away

Their social reflects their fun.

This year was better

Remembering what we have

Not what we’ve lost.

Past decisions made

To survive

Without weighing the cost.

But- my heart-

If not anticipated

It’s what we’ve got.

Two means not alone

It’s being seen.

Together is peace hard-bought.

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Judey Kalchik

It's my time to find and use my voice.

Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.

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  • Pauline Fountain4 months ago

    Thank you Judey Your words speak to me ‘Remembering what we have Not what we’ve lost. Past decisions made To survive Without weighing the cost.’ Pauline 🌸

  • Tender poem reflecting bitter and sweet times at Christmas... "Facebook smiles Families far away Their social reflects their fun. This year was better Remembering what we have." Something to be said for "Counting our Blessings."

  • Dana Crandell4 months ago

    This tugged on some heartstrings. Well done, Judey!

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Two, one, ten, we can bring kindness whatever the number.

  • Manisha Dhalani4 months ago

    Beautiful poem. Season's Greetings!

  • Awww, so wonderful! Merry Christmas! 🥰🥰🥰

  • To be seen is a marvelous thing.

  • Well done; love when a poem lets the reader fill in some of the gaps, and the sparseness here does just that. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas!

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Even though I don't Christmas...I loved the thoughts behind this piece and the heartfelt words. As ever, Judey, you stir something deep in us with your emotive poetry! Well done and hope you have a nice time!

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    I love this poem🥳🥰⛄️🎄🎉🎅🏽Merry Christmas to the two of you, Judey and Ken !!!

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