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Hold...

In Four, our Five...

By Kendall Defoe Published 9 months ago 1 min read
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Hold...
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Hold...and let a hand

Be in your grip; five by five.

One beat; one body.

It does...

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Kendall Defoe

Teacher, reader, writer, dreamer... I am a college instructor who cannot stop letting his thoughts end up on the page.

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  • Katherine D. Graham8 months ago

    you captured it!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)9 months ago

    Kendall this was a beautifully executed Haiku! I can see what care you took in your carefully chosen words! 😊

  • Denise E Lindquist9 months ago

    Nice! 😊💕

  • Rob Angeli9 months ago

    Lovely!

  • Touch indeed does have a memory! Loved your Haiku!

  • Jay Kantor9 months ago

    Thanks for the memory 'Touch' - I forgot -

  • Dana Stewart9 months ago

    You conveyed a lot in few words. Very nice!

  • Mackenzie Davis9 months ago

    Gorgeous. I love how much this says in so few words. As Sonia said, that last line is just sublime. "Touch has a memory." One of my favorite quotes of all time.

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh9 months ago

    Short and sweet indeed! The Last line is moving.

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