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Hold...and let a hand
Be in your grip; five by five.
One beat; one body.
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Kendall Defoe
Teacher, reader, writer, dreamer... I am a college instructor who cannot stop letting his thoughts end up on the page.
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Comments (9)
you captured it!
Kendall this was a beautifully executed Haiku! I can see what care you took in your carefully chosen words! 😊
Nice! 😊💕
Lovely!
Touch indeed does have a memory! Loved your Haiku!
Thanks for the memory 'Touch' - I forgot -
You conveyed a lot in few words. Very nice!
Gorgeous. I love how much this says in so few words. As Sonia said, that last line is just sublime. "Touch has a memory." One of my favorite quotes of all time.
Short and sweet indeed! The Last line is moving.