When my eyes fell upon his striking face
A world of butterflies enchanted me
Absorbed by this special, magical place
I knew this was the day I'd be set free.
Butterflies rising, voice so commanding
The energy was soaring between us
The shining stars above us are planning
As the wind sweeps around the lost stardust.
A gentle stroke of the face and I fall
His whispered words flow through my broken mind
No time was taken to break down my walls
As if our lives were already designed.
Snow droplets on the tip of both our tongues
The day we both became forever young.
About the Creator
Shauna Mullen
I like to write about true crime and do small investigations. I also write fiction sometimes
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Comments (6)
Please, please write more poetry like this!!!!!! This is stunning ❤️✨🙏💎
Very nice!
I love this! ❤️
Beautifully written full of feel good
Beautiful poem! You did a good job of capturing what it’s like to be in love.
So true, love does make you feel young 🌹💕