hey.
hey, you.
yes, you.
and you, over there.
where did we come from?
ey?
oh?
yes, i agree-
i do look
suspiciously
like that odd monkey over there
(hey, that stings a little!)
(i guess i didn’t evolve enough…)
(i wonder what’s gonna happen next?)
(wait, how long has this gone on for?)
hey.
hey, you!
yes, you!
where are we going?
ey?
oh?
yes, i agree
i would like-
suspiciously-
to become a cyborg!
(sounds fun.)
hey!
hey, you!
yes, you!
what made everything?
ey?
oh?
yes, i agree
a big explosion-
suspiciously-
let’s call it something stupid!
(the big bang!)
(boom!)
(pow!)
(i wonder what my ancestor amoebas thought of me…)
…
hey.
hey, you.
yes, you!
why are you so strange?
ey?
oh?
oh-
i agree.
that’s weird.
suspiciously.
what’s wrong with you?
where did you come from?
where did everyone come from?
ey?
oh?
…
no, i don’t agree.
value?
what’s value?
where does it come from?
…productivity?
…
hey, i’m supposed to be asking questions-
not you!
…
hey.
hey, you.
yes, you.
all of you, that circle of people.
wasn’t that so rude?!
***
if you can figure out what this means, i will salute you.
…basically i had an idea to write a small free-verse thing about a bunch of people talking about time and understanding and concepts without the supernatural explanations of things, and this is a very dumbed-down way of how they figured it out, in the process being confronted by someone who seems to think that there is a supernatural explanation for things.
i hope my amoeba ancestors are proud of me, too.
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