hello snow,
I hate,
to see you go,
but,
the sun,
it’s warm,
and I must farm,
people,
get hungry,
you know?
so,
be on your way,
you’re not welcome,
to stay,
you’re only good,
for a school delay;
but,
I do must tell,
you’re,
pretty as hell!
serene,
and pristine,
capping a mountain,
beauty,
beyond serene,
like I’ve never seen,
and,
the purity you bring,
falling gently,
from the sky,
landing softly,
in my eye;
yet,
on a windy day,
you drift away,
you’re,
such a magical bling,
birds,
inspired to sing!
so,
for now be sure,
in,
your silence,
so pure,
your beauty follows,
to forever endure.
Another of my “hip shot” productions, I appreciate your taking time to read, thank you kindly. 😊😊
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Moe Radosevich
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Comments (12)
The rhyme and flow made this so lyrical! Stunning snow poem!
"magical bling" - love it!
lovely flow to this.
Loved your poem, Moe! I'm on the fence. I love snow but if it goes away for the year, I won't be mad.
We don’t get much, but I liked your poem Moe! ☺️ ❄️
Awww, this was so wonderful! Loved your poem Moe!
Fabulous!!! Love this!♥️♥️💕
Beautiful work Moe!
That was lovely, Moe.
So lovely!! We got a fair amount of the white stuff today :)
I love this! I hate to see it go also!
Well Written My Dear