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Heaven’s Door

Knock, Knock, Knockin

By Moe RadosevichPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Heaven’s Door
Photo by Raúl Cacho Oses on Unsplash

Doors open, doors closed, who knows?

Inside, outside, we stand where we chose;

Satisfaction guaranteed,

Togetherness, yes, indeed,

Regardless the fate, we relate,

Accepting what comes, retaliate,

Combining chance, a little romance,

Tango, Waltz, Fox Trot, let’s dance;

Indulging in life’s little pleasures,

Only seeking our own special treasures,

Never doubting decisive measures!!

Laying in bed last nite listening to Dylan knocking on Heaven’s Door, and bang, this rolled out. It’s the door I choose.

Thanks for reading, come, knock with me.

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Comments (7)

  • Grz Colm11 months ago

    Must have missed this one. Liking the upbeat tone and pace of this one a lot. 👏😊

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Loved this so much, Moe! Fun, but I feel like there is a deep message as well 😊❤️

  • Kalina Bethanyabout a year ago

    This was great, thanks Moe 😊

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done, Moe

  • I always enjoy reading your inspiration behind your poem! Your acrostic was awesome! I hope you're doing well, Moe 🥰

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Great poem, my friend, and a great song for inspiration.

  • Kim Loostromabout a year ago

    I love this, playful and just a tad pensive!

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