Heaven’s Door
Knock, Knock, Knockin
Doors open, doors closed, who knows?
Inside, outside, we stand where we chose;
Satisfaction guaranteed,
Togetherness, yes, indeed,
Regardless the fate, we relate,
Accepting what comes, retaliate,
Combining chance, a little romance,
Tango, Waltz, Fox Trot, let’s dance;
Indulging in life’s little pleasures,
Only seeking our own special treasures,
Never doubting decisive measures!!
Laying in bed last nite listening to Dylan knocking on Heaven’s Door, and bang, this rolled out. It’s the door I choose.
Thanks for reading, come, knock with me.
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
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Comments (7)
Must have missed this one. Liking the upbeat tone and pace of this one a lot. 👏😊
Loved this so much, Moe! Fun, but I feel like there is a deep message as well 😊❤️
This was great, thanks Moe 😊
Beautiful piece. Well done, Moe
I always enjoy reading your inspiration behind your poem! Your acrostic was awesome! I hope you're doing well, Moe 🥰
Great poem, my friend, and a great song for inspiration.
I love this, playful and just a tad pensive!