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Heaven Bound

6W6L

By Mother CombsPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Image by NoName_13 from Pixabay

Raising her arm, fluttering her wing

Preparing to fly upward and onward

Under purity and innocence, she glides

Hauling the soul, she now cradles

Comforting the soul she now carries

Taking them to their final home

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Mike Judey Dharr Grz

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  • L.C. Schäfer2 months ago

    This is lovely and sad and touching all at once

  • With such tender love & grace--the very essence of the gospel.

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    What a beautiful visual. I love this. ❤

  • Suze Kay2 months ago

    Gorgeous sentiment in a restrictive structure!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    That hauling sounds so heavy!

  • Please ask her to take me with her too! Loved your 6W6L!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Very spiritual

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Ohhhh sorry sweet and sad too, great visual.

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