He forgot to zip
But he had some nerve on him, the naughty fellow. (The Senryu challenge).
Drunk, parks in driveway
Garage clicker, front door. Click?
Wife opens, pouts, sighs
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Left garage open
Thirsty, place keys in freezer
Fell asleep on couch
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Thieves cleaned out garage
Police shake heads. Sir, next time
Park in your garage!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Where are the car keys?
Wife sighed, headed for the fridge
She knows him quite well
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He forgot to zip
She pointed. He laughed, wiggled.
She grinned, shook her head.
After twenty years
She knows him well, embraces
Knowing his snafus.
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About the Creator
Novel Allen
Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky. ~~ Rabindranath Tagore~~
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Comments (12)
Baja! THIS is epic 🤣🤩
Oh nO! What a snafu! 👏☺️ Hey Novel, just letting you know Rick has messaged you about your word count for his challenge on messenger. Hope you are going well and having a great day! 😊
Images of Red Skelton come to mind, where such behavior does not offend but remains endeared.
That zip looks like something else.😂
Hahahahahahaha this was sooooo funnyyyyyy! I loved it!
Oh, that picture! ;-)
Great use of the zipper.
Supercute well written & clever! I think the zipper joke went over my head though. :)
Quite the story in such few words! Clever
wonderful
I loved this one- so relatable not zipping up
🤣