Haunted Devotion
Battles leave Bruises and then come to be memories...❤️
Unbind my hands,
As I convulse my legs...
I shut my eyes,
As you nodded your head...
No leaving me now,
We're the terms you said...
But I left anyway...
And you haunt me every day.
Enjoy your pride,
As your devotion cakewalk by...
I spilled a Cup full of mistakes.
Is it easier without having to say, let's make it work?
I cuffed my ears as echoes,
Of my fears pierced through...
What's left of the words you speak?...
Who else am I going to seek?...
You could have stayed,
But you had to leave...
Now Unlock My Heart
As I put my Guards
Aside from
What used to be,
Real Love ❤️
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (19)
That's really good, your poems always are
We could have fought for love. So why didn't we?
Oooo, I liked this one a lot! Great word choices!!
Beautiful!
Beautiful, as always
❤️❤️❤️
Beautiful lines in this poem, ❤️
Each and every time you hit it right where it is! 👍😁💖
This was so emotional! 🥺 Well done!
Great imagery with this! Excellent!
This was so deep and full of emotion. Such a great poem.✨
This one is deep and powerful. 🥹❤️ Wonderful job!
Good job.
Really real.
Powerful one, Lonzo. Whoo. Lots to explore here on another read-through. Thank you for sharing this.
Well done!
HOW do you keep doing this: 'I spilled a Cup full of mistakes.'? What a line❣❣❣ You're amazing Lonzo! 🎉✨🎇🎆🎈💖
You have a genuine gift, Lonzo. Well done!
a cup full of mistakes, wow, great job buddy 😊