It seems like a game big,
Is not seeming It's a deal,
have to play, use card big.
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Surround bodyguard, have to kill,
Meet damsel, work is big,
You don't think, it's not easy.
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Some are modern, some fuddy-duddy.
Some are aggressive, some are easy.
Boys around her are topic of worry.
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How much she is gorgeous
That much, boys are dangerous,
She is like honey, boys like bees.
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How much she is cool and hot
That much, boys are fool and wall,
She is like lyrics, boys like beats.
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Before her have to cross the wall,
have to shake hand with them all,
Is not seemed, a deal, a game big.
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About the Creator
Manthan
loving, living, chilling, relaxing, enjoying life,.... I am full crazy and bizarre 😍🥰😜😝. I read and write poems - poetry. And in rest of time I 🤔🙄🤭🤫🥱.
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This was amazing. I loved the analogies you've used. Like the girl was honey and lyrics. And the boy was bee and beat. Beautiful poem. I loved it!