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Happy Birthday

(I came across this photo on Unsplash and the first two lines came to me. It would be rude not to complete it 😇

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 8 months ago 1 min read
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Happy Birthday
Photo by Jess Bailey on Unsplash

softness dripping from satin folds

his hands caress this gift bestowed

awaiting the touch of fingers bold

beneath these layers of material gold

.

beside this gift he reverently kneels

the golden wrapping he slowly peels

excitement flows with all good feels

this present moment never felt so real

.

already his face is hot and flushed

his smile coy and cheeks blushed

he whispers softly, his voice hushed

this moment isn’t to be rushed

.

for beneath these layers of material gold

awaits a perfection to behold

his hands caress this gift bestowed

softness dripping from satin folds

love poems
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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

Know you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

🍊🍋💥🍋🍊

INSTAGRAM - kayzfraser

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  • Test8 months ago

    Lovely poem, so well designed and written with a flowing beauty to it. 💙Anneliese

  • Priya8 months ago

    super!

  • Berry Driven8 months ago

    Just gorgeous.

  • You never fail to amaze me with your rhyming poems! This was so beautiful!

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    beautiful

  • Ahna Lewis8 months ago

    I love how you circled back to the first two lines at the end! Really lovely!

  • Mattie :)8 months ago

    Cool poem, Kayleigh :)

  • Alex H Mittelman 8 months ago

    Great poem! Well written!

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