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Grow with Windfury

Hear and feel the opening of the wings.

By Gary LougheedPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
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Wind sky breezes past

Fury's last wind strikes within

This is a gateway.

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The haiku, in its traditional Japanese form, captures the essence of nature and life in its brevity. Every word, every pause, and every line is a world of its own. This particular haiku:

"Wind sky breezes past

Fury's last wind strikes within

This is a gateway."

Is a profound contemplation of nature, human emotion, and the myriad of transitions we undergo in our lives.

1. Wind Sky Breezes Past

The opening line immediately draws us into the vast expanse of the world. The "wind sky" is not just a physical expanse above us but represents the endless possibilities, dreams, and aspirations that exist. It’s the vast canvas of life where every breeze has its own story. Breezing past, it hints at the transient nature of life. Moments, like the breezes, come and go. Opportunities, experiences, and emotions drift past us, and it's upon us to seize them or let them go. It is a gentle reminder of the fleeting beauty and experiences the world offers, urging us to be present and cherish every gust of wind or simple moment that life brings our way.

2. Fury's Last Wind Strikes Within

The second line introduces a stark contrast. From the gentleness of the breeze, we're thrust into a tempestuous storm. "Fury's last wind" is more than a gust; it's a climax, an outburst. This line speaks of the human spirit, our emotions, our struggles, and our battles. Everyone has experienced that 'last wind' in one form or another. It might be the final push towards an ambition, the last straw in a challenging relationship, or a burst of inspiration after a long creative drought. This fury, though powerful, is an essential component of our growth. It challenges our limitations, breaks barriers, and reshapes our horizons. More than anything, it resides within, hinting that the true battles and revolutions are internal. The external world might influence us, but the real transformations happen within our souls.

3. This is a Gateway

The culmination of the haiku, "This is a gateway", is a revelation. Every breeze that passes, every burst of fury we experience, leads us to a new beginning, a new perspective, or a transformative moment. Gateways symbolize transition, change, and progression. It's an invitation to step into something new, to grow, to evolve. It echoes the sentiment that with every end, there is a beginning. The past experiences, no matter how gentle or furious, are not mere events; they are lessons, pathways, and gateways to self-discovery and empowerment.

The haiku beautifully amalgamates the boundlessness of nature with the intricate complexity of human emotion. It draws parallels between the vast, unpredictable skies and the unfathomable depths of our souls. Just as the sky witnesses countless transitions from serene mornings to tempestuous nights, our lives, too, are marked by moments of calm and storms of emotions.

Empowerment lies in acknowledging these moments, understanding their transient nature, and embracing the gateways they present. Every moment, whether it breezes past us or strikes with fury, carries the potential to usher us into a new realm of understanding and growth.

In conclusion, this haiku is not just a portrayal of the wind and sky but a profound narrative of life's journey. It celebrates the dance between the external world and our inner selves, reminding us of the ever-present gateways that promise transformation and empowerment. Whether we face the gentle whisper of opportunities or the fierce roar of challenges, every experience is a step towards a more enlightened and empowered self. Through its poetic symmetry and depth, the haiku encourages us to embrace the winds of change, for they are the gateways to our true essence.

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